Edit was super solid, gameplay was also cool but I felt like some of the clips weren't that crazy. In any case, you asked for feedback on the edit so I'll ignore gameplay for now. Sync on this was great, which is a bit hard to accomplish with hip hop. I also enjoyed the little screen pump VFX and the strong angles. One tip I'd give is to use the Sillygoose Halo 3 SFX download packs, that way you can smooth out your sound, since I heard a few BR bursts and other SFX in here that were noticeably cut short.